Jumat, 16 Desember 2011

Characters of FPD

Monster Behind the Three


 CERBERUS : A's enemy at second round

Forest : setting of second round

Castle : Door to third round saved by Cerberus untouched by Monster

Seventh Majesty : Snitch, Strong and Unpredictable. Charge on His Hand

Meadow : Place of The Most Dangerous Battle

Hell Boy : HB, His main enemy's is A can't face lose

bagian 13 part 6

Bagian 13 part 6: The Hiding Trees
M: Well that’s such a brilliant idea … cutting bridge’s rope, it’s cruel … yeah our new comer has pass the gap easily….what a great strategy … keep run to avoid strong enemy, and start kill when the strong has already pass the gap …. Then cut the rope for complement. You are snitch …..
A: yes I am ….
M: All people give a standing applause for her! for her snitch strategy …! Here she is jaycee the jancok …..!
(Boisterous applause from watcher ……)
Okay the section two, same no rules, just survive …. This forest, full of monster, if you can kill so kill it, if you weak hide and run, just survive ok….. That’s all …. And this game sponsored by hell gates the main door to the madness …
T: your snitch strategy only save you once but this time you’ll be end
A: let see who’s laughing last
T: hhhh good bye … catch you later …. Wk wk wk wk (laughing)
Then they scatter looking their own way to the Castle at the center of the forest ….

A: jancok neng endi iki cuk kok peteng kabeh ngene
B: sing ngerti isun mbok isun mageh during katon ….
A: sek cuk2 isun krungu suarane mendesis koyo ulo … panggonan opo she iki sabenere
B: io ketok ane koyo rawa2 ngono ag mbok, eh sek aku ketok2 ono seng obah2 ….
A: opo iku cuk?....
B: ojo rono mbok …! Bahaya ….! Mundur2! Sengidan no cuk !!!
A: (step back fast) ono opo cuk?
B: ssssssssssssstttttttttttt
A: hhhhhhhhhhhh (surprised, her heart beat fast, so afraid, breath fast)(hiding behind the trees) jancok (whispering)
M: aaaaaaaarrrrrrrrrgggggggggggg   ssshhhhhshhs       arrrrgggggggggghhhhsssss (smelling A sweat but can’t find A then past A by)
A: jancok opo ae iku cuk
B: cepet ngaleh o mbok akeh seng koyo ngono maneh neng mburine
A: sengidan neng endi cuk lek jak akean podo aee ketok an
B: terus mlakuo ngalor 10 meter engkok ono watu gedhe munggah o rono!
A: wes cuk aku wes munggah
B: y owes entenono neng kono ae sampek monster e liwat …..
A: monster paran iku cuk
B: sek isun during weruh biodata ne internet neng kene suwi koneksine …
A: wes liwat cuk terus neng endi iki?
B: istana ne ngedul mbok ngedul terus ….!
A: iku asal monster e yo cuk …!
B: yo neng kono iku wes …. Wes yo mbok ojo mati sek isun tak golek informasi, engkok lek wes entuk sun telpon maneh yo ….
A: cepetan ….,…. Jancok piye iki, mlaku neng sumber e lek gak ngerti kepiye mateni ne yo podo ae bunuh diri e …..!!! Neng kene ae yo mati …. Budhal a ewes ….
     A go to the center of where the monster come from to the place where so many monster gathering, A bet his life to the game and she will trough it to the end ….
     A keep past monster one by one, cause their sum not too much, A still can pass it easily and carefully. A hiding behind the trees and run, try to keep silent, not leaving track smell or anything that attract their attention …..
But not so long after that their sum getting bigger and bigger and so with their intensity. A see them every where but a still can’t see the castle …. This forest the battlefield for A is so tired to run and A can keep hiding when the monster quick or slow will find her.
Unfortunately now A spend her energy to run, she has to stop, but where …. in a silent night with moonlight bright ………..

A: (look at her mobile = no messages no missed call)    Neng endi kon cuk ?
 (A stop, she is breathing, heard all sound, A feel that the monsters can feel her present, and they trying to find her, they much close and close to her, A heard their voices getting louder, A open up her eyes, looking around)
She needs to turn out her brain where she can stop that entire monster …. But there isn’t that such a place. Both of her eye focus on one single place ….pasture…. Perfect place to kill them all …. There is no other way that’s the only way … all she can think just to end this anxious as soon as possible ….
A step up to the meadow, beneath the moonlight … A prepared his sword, arranged her breath, take her position cross of her sword straight up to her feet, a second, the time moves slowly, the wind blows stiff spread out their putrid smell vague …. A already knows their present ….
A: (head up looking up to the sky) how beautiful this night …. After this the time will move fast (seeing red eyes around her)
The monster from the forest darkness walking in to the meadow, see their shadow start shaped clearly …. After they see A clear, they run to her with dashing paw and fang ……
The time moves fast, A think the fast way to kill them is to prick their heart but A don’t know where it is. So she decide to prick their head like a Zombie but it’s to hard and too much risk so the last think is to cut their head off or just scratch their neck ….
Battle A vs Monster become the most dangerous one, every watchers so attend, breathtaking is the propiate words ….. A moves fast, she run and prick, she fight without think, just act where there is neck there is the place of A sword destination. But not that easy, they almost kill her, their paw almost through her eyes, A lose of sum, she beleagured, no room to escape, but a keep fight as fast and deathly prick till the last blood drops ….. Of course not so bad and A still survive …. 15 monsters she killed and A relief she still alive …. Not so long after that ……………… A’s mobile ring ….
A: hey finally you call ….
B: don’t kill them A ….!!!
A: what?
B: they are become twice if you kill one it will be separated to be 2 creatures alive …. Don’t kill them …. A … A….!
A: Oo……….hhh that’s too late I have killed
B: run A run as fast as you can …!!!
A: (run as fas as she can) ….. (through out the forest as far as she can) ….
B: what? A………
A: I have killed them
B: how many?
A: five teen
B: oh my god ………. (silence a second) A listen to me carefully … now you on north region 3km from your position there is swamp and a lot of big three …. Are you still with me ….?
A: yes go on
B: you better hurry A! They overtaking you
A: I try you should call before I killed them …
B: okay A the only way you cross that swamp is to swing like a Tarzan … that’s the only way to stop them, they will not cross, the swamp will absorp everything …
A: that sounds your swamp is great I wonder how big it is …….?
B: A! Don’t kill them…!
A: no I just cut his hand
B: A! If you hurt them it will make them more stronger and if you kill them it will make them twice …..
A: what are these creatures?
B: unbeatable one
A: you know if I can survive with this that’s a miracle ………
B: yeas we need it ….
A: why is your information always bad? Where is the good one ……?
B: still can find it?
A: you must be kidding me …..
B: I’m still trying ….
A: listen I want you to stay with me, don’t you dare to hang up the phone, if I died I want the one that hear my last breath is you …
B: yes sister …. You not gonna be death I found the short cut …..
A: where …?
B: turn left, when I count down and say turn ….
A: okay
B: turn 15 m turn right to that flower
A: then …
B: oh my god….so many red eyes, you in the middle of them …
A: so hurry ….!!!
B: straight …. Go ….!!!!
A: this is nuts it’s ravine …
B: you see the swamp?
A: yes ….
B: so jump!!!
A: what?
B: they more close to you, please sister you must jump …. Trust me!!!
A: (jump without think just act) ……….. Oh god thanks I still alive ….
B: trust me sister you just hurt not die yet ….
A: honey when this over you’ll be over too
B: what? I do my best
A: yes but you have more best if you still want your sister alive …!!!
B: just trust me okay ….!!!
A: so how are they?
B: still tring to get you …..
A: after I climb this trees and swing there I can rest?
B: may be ..
A: what do you mean may be?
B: you know soo many monster …. I can guarantee that …………
A: wright (climbing tree)
B: swing swing sister swing!!!! What are you waiting for?
A: Oh my god, you nuts twice , are you kidding me? This is so wide …. You want me to go swing and die in there?
B: trust me I have calculate that
A: how?
B: with wind you’ll be success …. I guess
A: I need a little time to prepared …
B: common sister they more close
A: till they arrive here I’ll swing
B: why you waste your time?
A: I need a rest too, I want see their face they trick me ………
B: you’re chose as long as you still in safety …..
A: they come they are really fast, it’s time, here it is, see my act ….A U O U O ….. Oaaaaaahhhhhhhhhmmmmmmmpp (landing safety) oh yeah you great … I realize how usefull you are ….
B: yeah and fortunately you, I am your brother Oh my God ………..
A: what?
B: you bleeding
A: yes I think scratch by limb when I swing ….
B: ………… ooh oh No no it can be like this …

Senin, 12 Desember 2011

Devil Side View


Sorry about make you waiting for so long
This is the long story Hope you enjoyed and like it
Use English cause some of these part have to use it for cool 



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D2: what about the deal that was his sister, I thought jaycee the jancok is him …
D1: however you can’t take it back ….
D3: but we deal about him to play in this game
D1: yes we deal about he can win on this game, it means he can be representated or no that’s doesn’t matter as long as he can win …., are you afraid? Our first deal is human, not only him but his sister also the part of this bet. Is that just profit for you, doesn’t it?
D2: Yes but his sister is strong
D1: you two guys don’t have to worry about it, that’s better than he play on by himself you know he smarther than his sister ….
D3: damned don’t you see it? she cut off the bridge’s rope, that’s a brilliant idea, what part’s that she looks like not smart?
D1: anyway may be this is myluck
D2: I thought he is jaycee the jancok
D1: they are team you can’t separated
D3: this is another story
D1: hey where were your faith that they were never make it
D3: lost blow by the wind
D2: if they are not teamwork my faith is still remain but this is another story his sister is strong no wonder he can survive … Looks like we have to prepare to pay the bet
HB: don’t be too soon I’ll be play on that game
D1: you in?
HB: yes, wright after she can win of cerberrus so I can sure that my enemy is worth to fight ….
D3: oh yes HB, with that our hope and chance is getting bigger….
D1: well then I have to prepare to pay the bet too …
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