Jumat, 16 Desember 2011

Characters of FPD

Monster Behind the Three


 CERBERUS : A's enemy at second round

Forest : setting of second round

Castle : Door to third round saved by Cerberus untouched by Monster

Seventh Majesty : Snitch, Strong and Unpredictable. Charge on His Hand

Meadow : Place of The Most Dangerous Battle

Hell Boy : HB, His main enemy's is A can't face lose

bagian 13 part 6

Bagian 13 part 6: The Hiding Trees
M: Well that’s such a brilliant idea … cutting bridge’s rope, it’s cruel … yeah our new comer has pass the gap easily….what a great strategy … keep run to avoid strong enemy, and start kill when the strong has already pass the gap …. Then cut the rope for complement. You are snitch …..
A: yes I am ….
M: All people give a standing applause for her! for her snitch strategy …! Here she is jaycee the jancok …..!
(Boisterous applause from watcher ……)
Okay the section two, same no rules, just survive …. This forest, full of monster, if you can kill so kill it, if you weak hide and run, just survive ok….. That’s all …. And this game sponsored by hell gates the main door to the madness …
T: your snitch strategy only save you once but this time you’ll be end
A: let see who’s laughing last
T: hhhh good bye … catch you later …. Wk wk wk wk (laughing)
Then they scatter looking their own way to the Castle at the center of the forest ….

A: jancok neng endi iki cuk kok peteng kabeh ngene
B: sing ngerti isun mbok isun mageh during katon ….
A: sek cuk2 isun krungu suarane mendesis koyo ulo … panggonan opo she iki sabenere
B: io ketok ane koyo rawa2 ngono ag mbok, eh sek aku ketok2 ono seng obah2 ….
A: opo iku cuk?....
B: ojo rono mbok …! Bahaya ….! Mundur2! Sengidan no cuk !!!
A: (step back fast) ono opo cuk?
B: ssssssssssssstttttttttttt
A: hhhhhhhhhhhh (surprised, her heart beat fast, so afraid, breath fast)(hiding behind the trees) jancok (whispering)
M: aaaaaaaarrrrrrrrrgggggggggggg   ssshhhhhshhs       arrrrgggggggggghhhhsssss (smelling A sweat but can’t find A then past A by)
A: jancok opo ae iku cuk
B: cepet ngaleh o mbok akeh seng koyo ngono maneh neng mburine
A: sengidan neng endi cuk lek jak akean podo aee ketok an
B: terus mlakuo ngalor 10 meter engkok ono watu gedhe munggah o rono!
A: wes cuk aku wes munggah
B: y owes entenono neng kono ae sampek monster e liwat …..
A: monster paran iku cuk
B: sek isun during weruh biodata ne internet neng kene suwi koneksine …
A: wes liwat cuk terus neng endi iki?
B: istana ne ngedul mbok ngedul terus ….!
A: iku asal monster e yo cuk …!
B: yo neng kono iku wes …. Wes yo mbok ojo mati sek isun tak golek informasi, engkok lek wes entuk sun telpon maneh yo ….
A: cepetan ….,…. Jancok piye iki, mlaku neng sumber e lek gak ngerti kepiye mateni ne yo podo ae bunuh diri e …..!!! Neng kene ae yo mati …. Budhal a ewes ….
     A go to the center of where the monster come from to the place where so many monster gathering, A bet his life to the game and she will trough it to the end ….
     A keep past monster one by one, cause their sum not too much, A still can pass it easily and carefully. A hiding behind the trees and run, try to keep silent, not leaving track smell or anything that attract their attention …..
But not so long after that their sum getting bigger and bigger and so with their intensity. A see them every where but a still can’t see the castle …. This forest the battlefield for A is so tired to run and A can keep hiding when the monster quick or slow will find her.
Unfortunately now A spend her energy to run, she has to stop, but where …. in a silent night with moonlight bright ………..

A: (look at her mobile = no messages no missed call)    Neng endi kon cuk ?
 (A stop, she is breathing, heard all sound, A feel that the monsters can feel her present, and they trying to find her, they much close and close to her, A heard their voices getting louder, A open up her eyes, looking around)
She needs to turn out her brain where she can stop that entire monster …. But there isn’t that such a place. Both of her eye focus on one single place ….pasture…. Perfect place to kill them all …. There is no other way that’s the only way … all she can think just to end this anxious as soon as possible ….
A step up to the meadow, beneath the moonlight … A prepared his sword, arranged her breath, take her position cross of her sword straight up to her feet, a second, the time moves slowly, the wind blows stiff spread out their putrid smell vague …. A already knows their present ….
A: (head up looking up to the sky) how beautiful this night …. After this the time will move fast (seeing red eyes around her)
The monster from the forest darkness walking in to the meadow, see their shadow start shaped clearly …. After they see A clear, they run to her with dashing paw and fang ……
The time moves fast, A think the fast way to kill them is to prick their heart but A don’t know where it is. So she decide to prick their head like a Zombie but it’s to hard and too much risk so the last think is to cut their head off or just scratch their neck ….
Battle A vs Monster become the most dangerous one, every watchers so attend, breathtaking is the propiate words ….. A moves fast, she run and prick, she fight without think, just act where there is neck there is the place of A sword destination. But not that easy, they almost kill her, their paw almost through her eyes, A lose of sum, she beleagured, no room to escape, but a keep fight as fast and deathly prick till the last blood drops ….. Of course not so bad and A still survive …. 15 monsters she killed and A relief she still alive …. Not so long after that ……………… A’s mobile ring ….
A: hey finally you call ….
B: don’t kill them A ….!!!
A: what?
B: they are become twice if you kill one it will be separated to be 2 creatures alive …. Don’t kill them …. A … A….!
A: Oo……….hhh that’s too late I have killed
B: run A run as fast as you can …!!!
A: (run as fas as she can) ….. (through out the forest as far as she can) ….
B: what? A………
A: I have killed them
B: how many?
A: five teen
B: oh my god ………. (silence a second) A listen to me carefully … now you on north region 3km from your position there is swamp and a lot of big three …. Are you still with me ….?
A: yes go on
B: you better hurry A! They overtaking you
A: I try you should call before I killed them …
B: okay A the only way you cross that swamp is to swing like a Tarzan … that’s the only way to stop them, they will not cross, the swamp will absorp everything …
A: that sounds your swamp is great I wonder how big it is …….?
B: A! Don’t kill them…!
A: no I just cut his hand
B: A! If you hurt them it will make them more stronger and if you kill them it will make them twice …..
A: what are these creatures?
B: unbeatable one
A: you know if I can survive with this that’s a miracle ………
B: yeas we need it ….
A: why is your information always bad? Where is the good one ……?
B: still can find it?
A: you must be kidding me …..
B: I’m still trying ….
A: listen I want you to stay with me, don’t you dare to hang up the phone, if I died I want the one that hear my last breath is you …
B: yes sister …. You not gonna be death I found the short cut …..
A: where …?
B: turn left, when I count down and say turn ….
A: okay
B: turn 15 m turn right to that flower
A: then …
B: oh my god….so many red eyes, you in the middle of them …
A: so hurry ….!!!
B: straight …. Go ….!!!!
A: this is nuts it’s ravine …
B: you see the swamp?
A: yes ….
B: so jump!!!
A: what?
B: they more close to you, please sister you must jump …. Trust me!!!
A: (jump without think just act) ……….. Oh god thanks I still alive ….
B: trust me sister you just hurt not die yet ….
A: honey when this over you’ll be over too
B: what? I do my best
A: yes but you have more best if you still want your sister alive …!!!
B: just trust me okay ….!!!
A: so how are they?
B: still tring to get you …..
A: after I climb this trees and swing there I can rest?
B: may be ..
A: what do you mean may be?
B: you know soo many monster …. I can guarantee that …………
A: wright (climbing tree)
B: swing swing sister swing!!!! What are you waiting for?
A: Oh my god, you nuts twice , are you kidding me? This is so wide …. You want me to go swing and die in there?
B: trust me I have calculate that
A: how?
B: with wind you’ll be success …. I guess
A: I need a little time to prepared …
B: common sister they more close
A: till they arrive here I’ll swing
B: why you waste your time?
A: I need a rest too, I want see their face they trick me ………
B: you’re chose as long as you still in safety …..
A: they come they are really fast, it’s time, here it is, see my act ….A U O U O ….. Oaaaaaahhhhhhhhhmmmmmmmpp (landing safety) oh yeah you great … I realize how usefull you are ….
B: yeah and fortunately you, I am your brother Oh my God ………..
A: what?
B: you bleeding
A: yes I think scratch by limb when I swing ….
B: ………… ooh oh No no it can be like this …

Senin, 12 Desember 2011

Devil Side View


Sorry about make you waiting for so long
This is the long story Hope you enjoyed and like it
Use English cause some of these part have to use it for cool 



………………………………………………………..
D2: what about the deal that was his sister, I thought jaycee the jancok is him …
D1: however you can’t take it back ….
D3: but we deal about him to play in this game
D1: yes we deal about he can win on this game, it means he can be representated or no that’s doesn’t matter as long as he can win …., are you afraid? Our first deal is human, not only him but his sister also the part of this bet. Is that just profit for you, doesn’t it?
D2: Yes but his sister is strong
D1: you two guys don’t have to worry about it, that’s better than he play on by himself you know he smarther than his sister ….
D3: damned don’t you see it? she cut off the bridge’s rope, that’s a brilliant idea, what part’s that she looks like not smart?
D1: anyway may be this is myluck
D2: I thought he is jaycee the jancok
D1: they are team you can’t separated
D3: this is another story
D1: hey where were your faith that they were never make it
D3: lost blow by the wind
D2: if they are not teamwork my faith is still remain but this is another story his sister is strong no wonder he can survive … Looks like we have to prepare to pay the bet
HB: don’t be too soon I’ll be play on that game
D1: you in?
HB: yes, wright after she can win of cerberrus so I can sure that my enemy is worth to fight ….
D3: oh yes HB, with that our hope and chance is getting bigger….
D1: well then I have to prepare to pay the bet too …
……………………………………………………………

Jumat, 25 November 2011

bagian 13 part 4

Bagian 13 part 4: jaycee the jancok!
Finally they match to the marathon games B is already prepared all the stuff to win …..
B: mak dongakno isun yo menang ….
A: hi yo …. Koyok o seng tau sun dongan2ni baen riko iku ag …..
B: mak njaluk sangu ne mak
A: sangu paran?
B: ombean ta opo ta opo ngonno mak …
A: seng ono cuk dhuwek e mak kabeh wes sun totok no yo
B: isun mau dhurung mangan mak elom yo …..
A: salah riko dhewek cuk tangi kawanen, lah gampang wes engkok mak neng garis finish nggawakno ombean …
B: yo durung sampek ombe ne isun mati sek mak
A: y owes cuk sun siramno ae neng rai riko
B: aduh piye iki mak
A: kakean cangkem iki wes kono budal o yo
B: isun ngelak mak … elom …
A: ono baen riko iku, he … ngombe o banyu keringet mangan o angin wareg wes ….
B: agek ta mak heng ono panganan2 sithik2 ae yo
A: seng ono cuk … kari cengkal siro iku ag diomongi
B: hm y owes mandhar mugo isun iki kuwat o ae …..
All the participants please start take place ….
B: mak lombane wes dimulai
A: yo ayok2 rono
…………………………………………………………...
HB: where is jaycee ….
D1: I don’t see him since yesterday
D2: or maybe he just doesn’t come
D3: it might be, he scared and run away
D1: there’s no way he can hide, he must be come, his pride just too high
HB: or may be it just only are words no meant
D1: he don’t lie
D3: remember our deal
D2: if he run away you lose
D1: He must be come must be …
HB: look there he is, at the corner, he is walking to start take place …
D1: look …., what I say he must be come
D3: yes wright …..
HB: it will be interesting …
D2: hell boy shall I follow him for you ….
HB: no you don’t need. I want to face somebody I never know, absolutely no record ….
D3: you look like underestimate him
HB: I just wanna make it fare
……………………………………………………………
K: participant 313
B: yes here
K: red marks …
B: ( giving a’s hand )
K: official mark check …… please take position …..
B: (come to take place ….)
K: oh I’m sorry sir only jaycee the jancok can play the game …
B: you just don’t understand, I am the player and she is just a red marks …
K: no this game can be representated, she has to trought it all alone
B: but no I’m the player, I’m supplosed to be run in this game …
K: I’m sorry sir, if you exist with forced I have to disqualificated you!
B: damned why this has to happen to me … fine she will trought it all alone …. But can we talk about something in private …. Can you do little help for me …. As a repay you can have some of this …. (Pure gold) ….
K: Em em (shakes head to right and left give sight to say no)
B: what about all …. ?
K: I’m sorry sir, even if I’m a devil, this game have to clean of bribe, please give respect to this game ….
B: fine how about if you see from this view? I’m just cheat with money …
K: no this game free of bribe this game is fare and clean. If you wanna cheat you can cheat inside the game cause no rules on this game, but if her want to cheat she has to cheat by her self …… I’m sorry sir I can’t help you (leaving)
B: what the hell???1?!@@#$%%^^&&                             I’m wonder with this devil free from bribe? Are you kidding me? Respect to the game? It can’t be real … common it’s pretty enough, I don’t understand it always works on the place where I come from …. Or may be I have tricked them too … I’ll think of that ….. AAAAA!!!!
A: paran nyeluk kari anter ag …. 
B: gedhigi ceritane isun sing oleh milu yo mak kudu seng nguwe abang2 iku dhewek hang oleh milu ….
A: terus isun hang tanding sing bener ae cuk …
B: yo kepiye maneh ….
A: jancuk iku dhuwek kadung sun totokno kabeh ….
B: tenang mak isun mageh ono simpenan sithik2 ….
A: adoh ta cuk ….
B: isun yo sing weruh mak …. Lako ono baen wes ….
A: hmmmmh (exhale: menghembuskan nafas: ngetokno ambekan ne) lapor no apak ambi mak yo nawi isun sing selamet isun njaluk sepurone ….
B: iyo mak isun lapor no apak ambi mak kongkon nggawe anak maneng polah anak e wes kalong siji ….
A: jancok kon iku ….
B: iyo mak semangat mak iki pisan dhuwek2 mu dhewe mak kudhu menang ….
A: iyo sun kudu balek modal iki ….
B: mak (berpelukan, hug, dirangkul) isun njaluk sepurone yo, sak urip sak matine riko, riko mageh dhulur isun saklawase ….
A: hmmm sopo seng weruh dalane kene adoh mung sampe kene ae …..
B: mak lek riko mati isun hang mbales no kematian riko sampek sun mati pisan
A: iyo lek, riko saklawase dhulur isun  …..
Then A with tough heart play on that game in her heart there’s no word to lose …..
Bagian 13 part 5: what about the deal?
Another side of A
The game is begin all the participants ready, there’s no fear, take your weapon in this part you really need protection. Armor, weapon, shield, sword, spear all you have to do is survive, just don’t die …. Hope the death not be with you this time ….. JDTERRRRRRR sound of gun is a sight that the game now is officially open …………… All participant start to run and fight ……………..
A: (take sword from somebody death in front of her) … at this part most of participant kills his competitor now …. You better watch them, only the stronger can survive ….
B: keep run AAA!!!! As fast as you can ….!!!
W: see there are smart participant and fool, this sinner game, if you much kill the distance between you and gap more near, it means more sinner you are more close you to the abyss and more close to the gap, the main gate of hell. The deepest gap of depression people, guilty darkness, and regret … you never be out forever …. It’s to much risk much sinner you are much far you fell down …. Where there is no light at all …… If you smart you have to keep running, you can’t stop, if you stop it means you fight …. But this way you see the gap much more near and near but the really is you more far away ….. as long as I know no one can run that far …. That one passes by with kill her own brother …. It’s tragic …..
B: I know this is will happened, you cheat me …. What I have supplose to do? ( make call to a’s phone ) don’t stop!
A: there’s no way, what kind of this marathon, this is chase and chased, I can’t run that fast
B: keep running if you stop, you have to fight
A: what ?
B: much more you kill much more your sin much more you to the gap, and much more you fell down if you lose ….
A: aggghh ….. (Fall but keep running)
P: stay away from my way ….
B: what happened A? Keep running!!!
A: I see so decide your way I take the risk ….
B: no A …! You will never out forever … I can’t let you go A … at least if we end up here we through it together …..
A: there’s nothing you can do …
B: A you must be die ….
A: may be you forget?
B: what …?
A: I have no mercy ….. If I don’t die who else want take this sin?
B: A …..  Do it whatever you want ….
A: (pick off the phone) you do the biggest mistake …. I am the true evil …. Don’t mess up with me …..
The match between A and monster …. A wins and keep win in every single match. A kill every living things in front of her eyes. With no doubt, A keep running, see the gap more near certainly. She passed it by and cut it off the bridge’s rope, broke the bridge is a brillian idea, and make A become the last survivor. The game only remains 7 participants and A automatically kills all the rest. In this game ... if you stuck you die ...

Kamis, 20 Oktober 2011

BONUS story 13

                             BONUS Story: Devil side view

D1: have you heard about jaycee the jancok?
D2: yeah he register to the marathon game
D1: I don’t know why he register to the game for weak creatures that even unaccepted to this society,….
D2: I think it just for save her energy it must be so easy trought it all
Hell boy: what are you talking about?
D1: jaycee the jancok register to the marathon game
HB: what? he avoid me he’s a coward I’m so disappointed…
D3: exciting….
HB: what do you talking about he’s coward
D3: there must be another reason why he do that? Don’t you know that the marathon game true history?
D1: yeah I’m just remember that is truly the hardest game sevent majesty is in the end of that game…
D3: yeah yo know because of that, if weak creature win on that game. He is not only accepted but also increase his status become some one that we have to give respect….
D2: how can I forget that rule
HB: it’s getting interesting what he really planed?
D1:somehow he has to win how about we double the bet ?
D23: done as your wish …
HB: you can playing the games all around but when she face me I will kill him nobody can beat me no one …….

B: iki mungsuh sing nduwe lomba, wong iki wingi tarung pringkat 7. Ati2 o mak!

bagian 13 part 3

Bagian 13 part 3: Gambler
A: he cuk sampek kapan iki neng kene terus isun males yo ate turu ….
B: yo ulung ta mak buru pertandingan pembukaan
A: sing kuat wes moto isun ngantuk sing katon seng seger2 maneh wes …
B: yo iki sun takok no (leaving to asking about the battle and when they are finish)
S:what do you want?
B: I just want to know when we going back to the hotel?
S: after we got the winner for semifinal
B: what time is it?
S: I don’t know
B: anyway what about the marathon game? The other way to go to semifinal, it looks like doesn’t popular here
S: yes it is that game only for freak creatures that absolutely doesn’t accept to this society
B: like what creature?
S: the creatures that deserve to die anyway they are weak there is no chance to win
B: is marathon game ever had a winner
S: as long as I know never
B: thanks
S: oh sir don’t you want a drink
B: oh yes I’m little bit thristy, what drink?
S: child blood and eyes ball the special drink to day it’s so delisious.
B: oh no thanks, common im not vampire
E: do you wanna be I can make you …
B: no way stay away from me
………. Edan ta kepiye jare seng ono  panganane menungso ag, endi mak iki mau jare yo yo ……………. Ngilang maneh wong iku wes
B: he, mak paran2 an siro iku jare?
A: eh ulung2 cuk mantap iki saket mau isun menang terus ag cuk
B: heh wes mak leren mak2 gak berkah
A: lah wes iki gae mbayar hotel duwek ngene iki seng di akoni
B: judi opo iku mak ?
A: nyabung petek yo gak lah iku pertandingan 130 seng menang sopo totoan wes
B: riko totoan sopo ?
A: aaaak iyah sithik maneh2  antem2 uncalno wes
B: eh mak2 seng ngereken nak ceret or owes
……………….A few minutes later…................
A: eh jancok eh endi lare iku mau , …. He cuk2
B: paran se mak isun iki ngantri iki ndaftar
A: sido ndaftar opo cuk?
B: yo iki marathon
A: oh yo wes peserta ne kari dhowo yo
B: yoh tapi gak popo loket e akeh kok cepet
A: eh iyo iki wes wayahmu mu
B: yo
S: number of participants?
B: 313
S: red marks?
B: giving a’s hand
…. Next to marathon registration there is a lottery marathon ticket……………….
A: eh cuk2 daftarno isun iku cuk
B: opo she
A: iku kok
B: paran
A: pacuan kuda marathon ta cepetan cuk mumpung isun untung2 e iki
B: lek kalah ojo nangis
A:gak kate kalah
……………………………………………………………
B: totoan neng sopo mak?
A: neng kon lah cuk sopo maneh?
B: 313 participant, totoan piro mak?
A: kabeh, I bet it all
S: deal this is your lottery don’t loose it okay
A: absolutely
B: eh mak2 ngawur ag di kekno kabeh
A: west a cuk isun percoyo ambi kemampuan riko
B: ngawur eh lek kalah piye ?
A: y owes wayae kabur wes, maning o lek iku duwek kadung riko seng menang sampak final iku duwek yo lumayan kan urip neng kene butuh bondho biasa jiwa bisnis
B: lek kalah ?
A: y owes sing paran2
B: mak ngawur iki?
A: west a mak iki judi menjudi, mateni konco, ngapusi uwong jagone wes mak iki riko seng usah  kuater …. Strategi ne mak iki wis siap (ambi nyengir sengit koyok o pinter2 ro dhewek iku ag………..ha ha ha )