Rabu, 16 Juli 2014

Devil side view : bonus story

Bonus story FPD : What The Hell

D4: what the hell is that?
D1: what?
D3: CB knee is shaking
D2: No way … he tough dog, his roar is the most deathly one …
D1: Jaycee keep going with his wings that increasingly gone!
D4: relax, it’s just the matter of time only some bristle left and CB will win, even the power of an angel could come to the last.
D1234: CB!...CB!...CB!...CB!...CB!...CB!... Yes CB eats him up! (B was exactly in front of CB with only one bristle left)
D1:  Wow Wow Wow What the hell is that ???!!! …. No! No! .. No! …. CB don’t die (CB dying)
D2: Wow? That’s it … CB just die with one bristle
D3: No way …! I can’t believe it …
D4: what the hell is that? …
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D1: wow that was blow up my mind, what kind an angel is that?
D2: where he get that power?
D3: don’t you forget special powers will owned by those whose come back from the death
D4: an afterlife special power
D3: yes, black angel … death angel …
D2: no it’s not, his white not black
D1: well it must be an exception … it must have some explanation about that
D2: how? He use wing as a sword not a …
D4: wait a minute I remember our blinding curse … an angel with sword …
D1: yes it’s not death angel for human it’s for us; with his shimmering light he is blinding our eyes and drags us back to hell. The only one who can escape from him is
D2: HB …
D3: yes with all his power only HB could win ….
D1: HB must be interesting to meet his old friend …
D4: But it’s his sister HB face tomorrow, not him so what do you think?
D2: I can’t think, from now on I will only enjoy the view
D3: no longer expectation bigger than watch them win … it’s been a while right? It’s getting more and more interesting every time they fight to the next stage
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D1: Seventh majesty could fall…
D2: Keep your mouth shut! Don’t you dare to ever say that again! Or your head will fall just like you said …
D3: What’s wrong D2? You should be happy. The only one who will get profit if they win is you. You’ll be rich in less than an hour
D2: it’s different, this is not only a game. Seventh majesty must be notice. They not only just two fool right now. They could end our world.
D1: Heeeh they are not that strong to kill seventh majesty
D2: yes but them (the crowd all is spirit and soul without hope). Don’t you see what they bring to those pity souls?
D4: what you said is just a dream. This is a place without a dream. All hope, dream and life end. That’s what we eat right?
D3: yes that was so damn right
HB: you are all talking how great about them, don’t forget they just human. They Just a living flesh that will burn in hell.
D1: HB. Your old friend comes by to say hello to your pet. You watch it in a front line. How do you feel when your pet is died?
HB: How dare you say that word to me? (cracking D1 neck) just because my pet died now you’re all looking down on me?
D1: I’m sorry HB, but you can’t deny it, he is strong right? And you’ll be the next facing his sister deathly prick.
HB: heh ha ha ha ha (evil laugh). Don’t go wrong a human will never beat me. I will tear her apart. And eat her up as my supper. I wonder how it tastes.
D1: yes I almost forgot they still a human, they don’t die yet.
D3: Owh HB, you are our last hope …
CB: and her brother … I will take his head off and hang it on my door. All that left from them will be burned in to dust then I will pour his ashes to my dog’s grave, Cerberrus.
All evil even ask for help … that was so shocked, no one ever expected before. Now they know how strong are them. This no longer a game, this is a fight … this is war. After long times no entertain deserve enough to get their attention. Now the duo has come that could bring them a new age…

“She arise from her down just like a light of the dawn. Come erase the night and burn you alive.”

Kamis, 05 Desember 2013

bagian 13 part 9



bagian 13 part 9: This is not the last

B: if i'll be end here and so were you
CB: you are nothing but dust, you will be end here forever
CB roaring loader and loader but B keep approach, straight without a fear, steady and tough no way to turning back, only in his eye said the victory is mine. In every single steps his bristle loss, in every second what called with fear is about to find out. CB was born without fear but now his knee start to shaking a little bit. CB is so confusing what the hell is this human thinking? Why he do that? But B not even say a word. After some steps until B is closed enough to CB, he take one last bristle in his body and embedded it at CB's heart. That's it that's the end of CB.
CB: (shock and unbelievable face about what B have done to him)
B: (enjoying the view)
CB: How come? Why? Please give me a reason to understand
B:  Only a human could reach the boiling point and going mad but animal only knew fear. I don't have time for this bullshit. Let's just get it end, between you and me.

Senin, 16 Januari 2012

bagian 13 part 8

Bagian 13 part 8: Cross Over
Cerberrus is sleeping wright in front of A, it’s wheezy becoming wind that blow a’s hair. Big dog with 3 head without chained and ready to kill. Look’s like a’s luck ends here . . . .
B: sister, what the hell is that?
A: I don’t know                              
B: (speechless) looking how big and creepy is Cerberrus, go back before fight
A: I lose my hope my wing is broken
     One thing that they don’t know is cerberrus weakness. Cause it really don’t have. However harder a fight, she will be dead in one snatch…
B: sister I will just sitting here and hear your last breath
A: hm … and I think we have to plan our future here, because I don’t see other way …
     Accidentally, A is waked up cerberrus. His big head starting to rise, .…Ggrrrhhh gggrrrhhh. His big and sharp tooth is showing. He move his body slowly walking around A. There is a secreet door behind cerberrus and a think that, it’s the door to crossing over. Even without chance to survive a try to reach the door. And cerberrus start attacking A with his tail, head, paw, and hands. A’s sword is nothing to him. Nothing to lose A fight …
A: a secreet door …
B: yeah, it just 100 meters, you can through it …
A: How can we get trhrough it? He don’t chase me just attack me in his reach to door
B: we need disturbing
A: can you do something to disturb his attention?
B: nothing more attrack him than you
A: oh come on I can’t be stuck here forever …
B: but it’s just doesn’t makin’ sense, Cerberrus Is animal, without chained how he don’t chase his prey. He must be have a instinc
A: but you see the fact really is … this room is too small, he can still reach me without chased me. He bar all the door, except front door
B: so why just you don’t go out and climb?
A: are you crazy that tower height is 300 meters off the ground … quickly brother you have to think something … fast or slow this ruin will kill me
B: I still thinking, what if you swing with that hanging lamp and landing at the door?
A: do I looks like a super hero to you? I don’t have super power, wings , or gossamer.
B: I know let the ruin kill him or just checked him to kill you, while you have a time to enter that door ….
A: well, thanks brother you are my brilliant boy, this game bet my life …
     A run around cerberrus and everytime he attack make that building more decay. A try so hard run without protection. Elicitation cerberrus to broken a pillar. Until the last pillar will kill them both…. A is climbing the ruin with so fast reaching for the hanging lamp and cerberrus exactly at her below with head up open up his mouth and jump . . . 
A: you want me come and get me
CB: aaaarrrrrhhhh (jumping) and snatch ….
A: (swing and jumping, landing at cerberrus back ….) die hard I should be the actress ….
     Just as the last pillar broken, the ruin start to falling and affict both of them ….
A: (unconscious …)
CB: (stuck in the middle of ruin, unconscious a while then open his eyes and see a lying there. Cerberrus try to escape from ruin and kill A)
     But just a cople of step the wind blow stiff and rotate appear an angel in front of him ….. with his pure white wings cross ….
B: you want my sister become your prey not as that easy … face me first
CB: (attaking)
B: (attacking with his lighting wind and streech out his steel wings)
CB: ( pushes back because of the light) …gggggrrrrhhh …gggrrrhhh….
A: (conscious) B! What are you doing here?
B: protecting you, go sister quickly!
A: fine ( leaving her brother fighting with cerberrus and go upstairs with so many stairways)
B: now just between us …
CB: aaarrrgggghh your light will never kill me
B: no …. feel this ( his wings shed apart and returning become sword attack cerberrus)
CB: (scratched by the steel wings sword, the scratch keep open up and gape) ha ha ha ha ha (laughing) you are stupid or what? That is your only protection why do you waste it? When your bristle is nothing left you will die
B: he he (smiling) and so were you, that wound will expand and you will never recovered that
CB: so this battle win by who’s survive the last aaaarrrrgggggg let’s see how far you can go … AARRRGGHHHH (roaring loud and make thing around him shaking, untune ear until your blood flows turn back, so hurt … and finally blow your head that bring you to the death)
B: ahhhh (shelter at his wings that some bristle regardless and disappear in to pieces)
CB: heh your wings increasingly gone

bagian 13 part 7

Bagian 13 part 7: Unfinished
A: what’s wrong brother?
B: you’re bleeding attrack their attention, they run to you wright now …. Oh my god their sum too many ….
A: what I have supposed to do?
B: I don’t know they are everywhere no place to hide
A: they can smell it from this far?
B: yes smell of blood so strong more than any other smell …
A: don’t you think it’s time for good news?
B: yes but bad news still going on . . .
A: what about finished this game before they found me …
B: how? kill any other participants is impossible they are so far from you . . . but castle located, you have half way …
A: is there any chance for me to success?
B: that’s a miracle, you just need to find the door and cross over
A: let’s try ….
B: I’ll do my best sister
A: I know you will ….
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D: who is this human? I think I know you …
B: common man why this connection internet here is so bad …. Common my sister need you I need you ……….
D: I know you the one that get to pee on me …. Like I said I’ll get my revenge … it’s time for you to die …..
B: sister2 I’ll be back …. Don’t die yet !
D: ssssssshhhhhhh ssshhh aaaaargggghhhh
B: (turn around and surprised) what are you doing here …. ?
D: killing you …
B: don’t you see that employee only! Wright ?
D: (keep approach) argggghhhss ….
B: ooh no you can’t eat me … I am her team ….  You can eat me … 
D: who said that? There is no rule …
B: no rule ….? Wright damned ….
D: let’s finish this ….. aaaaaaaaarrrrrrrrgghhh
B: aaaaaahhhhh (run)….
D: (chasing around B)
B: damned where the hell that creature comes? At this moment … it can’t be real ….
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A: B! B! Where are you B? (Heard sound ends calling) please you have to keep your promise to me …. (Looking around don’t know where to hide and go … keep straight better then stop here)
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B: common go away …( look at the mobile and notebook that he left there)
D: don’t be pusy show your self human …. Let’s fininsh this quickly …..!!!
B: (heard his mobile ringing)
D: (heard B’s mobile ringing) hm I got you …. If you don’t show your self I’ll destroy this thing … pick aside honey you can runaway from me or save your sister …. Looks like your sister in trouble … really big trouble …
B: (so worried and guilty think something to do)
D: I’ll counting to tree if you don’t show up your sister end
B: No! (Kicking bottle move the mobile and note book) you don’t mess up with me (take spear from broom stick)
D: ha ha ha (laughing)
B: I’ll show you what I got … (fighting with D so many hit, smack, and strike but keep stand up and fight)
D: I love tough enemy
B: (My last breath …. My last breath) I keep my promise
D: (fighting with B after the hard fight B win from him)
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M: aaarrrgggg aaarrrggghhhs aaaaarrrhhss
A: (take position) you can push me back … brother I keep my promise too ….
M: (with other Monsters try to kill A so long and hard fight)
A: I don’t care how big your sum at least, I keep killing you
M: (keep fighting and double their sum until A excess)
A: you want my death, not so fast, I will not dead before he heard my last breath … (keep fighting)
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B: I am back …. A, are you still alive? (B hurt so bad )
A: yes I still alive (exhausted)
B: (look at the screen 80 monster will rise soon after their death) you great … listen there is a bomb that can kill all of them, automatically you will make them twice of course, but it will give you time 15 minutes to escape and go to the castle …
A: how do you know? That’s not usual information
B: a monster told me that
A: how can you trust him?
B: believe me I know he is not lying , he is the maker ….
…………….flash back………………………………
D:you great enemy (dying) I tell you something, there is a bomb, it can kill all of that monster, you just have 15 minutes before they rise twice, it’s enough time to go to the castle …
B: how can I trust you?
D: you know … I am the maker ….
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A: and where it is?
B: at the end of every light
A: where?
B: at the darkest place ravine
A: I have to go back?
B: no keep straight turn left and you will find, remember the darkest place
A: this is a good news good job … (A run and search for the bomb)
     A run chasing by the monster … she run and hiding in a same time without fear she trough out the dark to the world darkest place and find the bomb ….
A: hei monster … (turn on the fire) you’re death
B: great sister your success 100%
A: it’s time to run … (run 300km/hours just reflection, to the castle without any obstacle standing in the way)
…………………..Finally arrived…………………….
A: now I can take a rest i really tired ….
B: yes sister this is a long way and it’s time to break …
A: how many time left?
B: taken easy sister this castle untouched by the monster
A: why?
B: maybe that’s their rule hm I don’t know
A: (open the door castle and walk in, not so long after that at the center) now I know the reason …
R: sssshhhhh ….z…Z….z….Z….z….ZZZ……
A: Why they don’t touch this place

Jumat, 16 Desember 2011

Characters of FPD

Monster Behind the Three


 CERBERUS : A's enemy at second round

Forest : setting of second round

Castle : Door to third round saved by Cerberus untouched by Monster

Seventh Majesty : Snitch, Strong and Unpredictable. Charge on His Hand

Meadow : Place of The Most Dangerous Battle

Hell Boy : HB, His main enemy's is A can't face lose

bagian 13 part 6

Bagian 13 part 6: The Hiding Trees
M: Well that’s such a brilliant idea … cutting bridge’s rope, it’s cruel … yeah our new comer has pass the gap easily….what a great strategy … keep run to avoid strong enemy, and start kill when the strong has already pass the gap …. Then cut the rope for complement. You are snitch …..
A: yes I am ….
M: All people give a standing applause for her! for her snitch strategy …! Here she is jaycee the jancok …..!
(Boisterous applause from watcher ……)
Okay the section two, same no rules, just survive …. This forest, full of monster, if you can kill so kill it, if you weak hide and run, just survive ok….. That’s all …. And this game sponsored by hell gates the main door to the madness …
T: your snitch strategy only save you once but this time you’ll be end
A: let see who’s laughing last
T: hhhh good bye … catch you later …. Wk wk wk wk (laughing)
Then they scatter looking their own way to the Castle at the center of the forest ….

A: jancok neng endi iki cuk kok peteng kabeh ngene
B: sing ngerti isun mbok isun mageh during katon ….
A: sek cuk2 isun krungu suarane mendesis koyo ulo … panggonan opo she iki sabenere
B: io ketok ane koyo rawa2 ngono ag mbok, eh sek aku ketok2 ono seng obah2 ….
A: opo iku cuk?....
B: ojo rono mbok …! Bahaya ….! Mundur2! Sengidan no cuk !!!
A: (step back fast) ono opo cuk?
B: ssssssssssssstttttttttttt
A: hhhhhhhhhhhh (surprised, her heart beat fast, so afraid, breath fast)(hiding behind the trees) jancok (whispering)
M: aaaaaaaarrrrrrrrrgggggggggggg   ssshhhhhshhs       arrrrgggggggggghhhhsssss (smelling A sweat but can’t find A then past A by)
A: jancok opo ae iku cuk
B: cepet ngaleh o mbok akeh seng koyo ngono maneh neng mburine
A: sengidan neng endi cuk lek jak akean podo aee ketok an
B: terus mlakuo ngalor 10 meter engkok ono watu gedhe munggah o rono!
A: wes cuk aku wes munggah
B: y owes entenono neng kono ae sampek monster e liwat …..
A: monster paran iku cuk
B: sek isun during weruh biodata ne internet neng kene suwi koneksine …
A: wes liwat cuk terus neng endi iki?
B: istana ne ngedul mbok ngedul terus ….!
A: iku asal monster e yo cuk …!
B: yo neng kono iku wes …. Wes yo mbok ojo mati sek isun tak golek informasi, engkok lek wes entuk sun telpon maneh yo ….
A: cepetan ….,…. Jancok piye iki, mlaku neng sumber e lek gak ngerti kepiye mateni ne yo podo ae bunuh diri e …..!!! Neng kene ae yo mati …. Budhal a ewes ….
     A go to the center of where the monster come from to the place where so many monster gathering, A bet his life to the game and she will trough it to the end ….
     A keep past monster one by one, cause their sum not too much, A still can pass it easily and carefully. A hiding behind the trees and run, try to keep silent, not leaving track smell or anything that attract their attention …..
But not so long after that their sum getting bigger and bigger and so with their intensity. A see them every where but a still can’t see the castle …. This forest the battlefield for A is so tired to run and A can keep hiding when the monster quick or slow will find her.
Unfortunately now A spend her energy to run, she has to stop, but where …. in a silent night with moonlight bright ………..

A: (look at her mobile = no messages no missed call)    Neng endi kon cuk ?
 (A stop, she is breathing, heard all sound, A feel that the monsters can feel her present, and they trying to find her, they much close and close to her, A heard their voices getting louder, A open up her eyes, looking around)
She needs to turn out her brain where she can stop that entire monster …. But there isn’t that such a place. Both of her eye focus on one single place ….pasture…. Perfect place to kill them all …. There is no other way that’s the only way … all she can think just to end this anxious as soon as possible ….
A step up to the meadow, beneath the moonlight … A prepared his sword, arranged her breath, take her position cross of her sword straight up to her feet, a second, the time moves slowly, the wind blows stiff spread out their putrid smell vague …. A already knows their present ….
A: (head up looking up to the sky) how beautiful this night …. After this the time will move fast (seeing red eyes around her)
The monster from the forest darkness walking in to the meadow, see their shadow start shaped clearly …. After they see A clear, they run to her with dashing paw and fang ……
The time moves fast, A think the fast way to kill them is to prick their heart but A don’t know where it is. So she decide to prick their head like a Zombie but it’s to hard and too much risk so the last think is to cut their head off or just scratch their neck ….
Battle A vs Monster become the most dangerous one, every watchers so attend, breathtaking is the propiate words ….. A moves fast, she run and prick, she fight without think, just act where there is neck there is the place of A sword destination. But not that easy, they almost kill her, their paw almost through her eyes, A lose of sum, she beleagured, no room to escape, but a keep fight as fast and deathly prick till the last blood drops ….. Of course not so bad and A still survive …. 15 monsters she killed and A relief she still alive …. Not so long after that ……………… A’s mobile ring ….
A: hey finally you call ….
B: don’t kill them A ….!!!
A: what?
B: they are become twice if you kill one it will be separated to be 2 creatures alive …. Don’t kill them …. A … A….!
A: Oo……….hhh that’s too late I have killed
B: run A run as fast as you can …!!!
A: (run as fas as she can) ….. (through out the forest as far as she can) ….
B: what? A………
A: I have killed them
B: how many?
A: five teen
B: oh my god ………. (silence a second) A listen to me carefully … now you on north region 3km from your position there is swamp and a lot of big three …. Are you still with me ….?
A: yes go on
B: you better hurry A! They overtaking you
A: I try you should call before I killed them …
B: okay A the only way you cross that swamp is to swing like a Tarzan … that’s the only way to stop them, they will not cross, the swamp will absorp everything …
A: that sounds your swamp is great I wonder how big it is …….?
B: A! Don’t kill them…!
A: no I just cut his hand
B: A! If you hurt them it will make them more stronger and if you kill them it will make them twice …..
A: what are these creatures?
B: unbeatable one
A: you know if I can survive with this that’s a miracle ………
B: yeas we need it ….
A: why is your information always bad? Where is the good one ……?
B: still can find it?
A: you must be kidding me …..
B: I’m still trying ….
A: listen I want you to stay with me, don’t you dare to hang up the phone, if I died I want the one that hear my last breath is you …
B: yes sister …. You not gonna be death I found the short cut …..
A: where …?
B: turn left, when I count down and say turn ….
A: okay
B: turn 15 m turn right to that flower
A: then …
B: oh my god….so many red eyes, you in the middle of them …
A: so hurry ….!!!
B: straight …. Go ….!!!!
A: this is nuts it’s ravine …
B: you see the swamp?
A: yes ….
B: so jump!!!
A: what?
B: they more close to you, please sister you must jump …. Trust me!!!
A: (jump without think just act) ……….. Oh god thanks I still alive ….
B: trust me sister you just hurt not die yet ….
A: honey when this over you’ll be over too
B: what? I do my best
A: yes but you have more best if you still want your sister alive …!!!
B: just trust me okay ….!!!
A: so how are they?
B: still tring to get you …..
A: after I climb this trees and swing there I can rest?
B: may be ..
A: what do you mean may be?
B: you know soo many monster …. I can guarantee that …………
A: wright (climbing tree)
B: swing swing sister swing!!!! What are you waiting for?
A: Oh my god, you nuts twice , are you kidding me? This is so wide …. You want me to go swing and die in there?
B: trust me I have calculate that
A: how?
B: with wind you’ll be success …. I guess
A: I need a little time to prepared …
B: common sister they more close
A: till they arrive here I’ll swing
B: why you waste your time?
A: I need a rest too, I want see their face they trick me ………
B: you’re chose as long as you still in safety …..
A: they come they are really fast, it’s time, here it is, see my act ….A U O U O ….. Oaaaaaahhhhhhhhhmmmmmmmpp (landing safety) oh yeah you great … I realize how usefull you are ….
B: yeah and fortunately you, I am your brother Oh my God ………..
A: what?
B: you bleeding
A: yes I think scratch by limb when I swing ….
B: ………… ooh oh No no it can be like this …